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   A fragment of the doctrine of the Church of the Firstborn
   
-  There came a time were the chief guardians of heaven rose up in wrath against one another as their hopes for the firstborn were greatly at odds, amongst this tumult the stars darkened the world shook and the God lun was cast from the firmament sinking the northlands in its ruin giving birth to the sea of lun heralding the Upheaval of Elysium.
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+  There came a time were the chief guardians of heaven rose up in wrath against one another as their hopes for the firstborn were greatly at odds, the followers of the owl stood by the belief that the firstborn were as chattle to the gods and should be treated as such , while the sons of Sol saw the firstborn as equals to be free in body and mind , amongst this tumult the stars darkened the world shook and the God lun was cast from the firmament sinking the northlands in its ruin giving birth to the sea of lun heralding the Upheaval of Elysium.
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