From 95180418b6b717997c8932964078b30f0ebcc8eb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: grendelvich Date: Fri, 4 Aug 2023 16:59:14 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Update 'Cobalt Temple ' --- Cobalt-Temple-.md | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/Cobalt-Temple-.md b/Cobalt-Temple-.md index 044070a..02e80e4 100644 --- a/Cobalt-Temple-.md +++ b/Cobalt-Temple-.md @@ -1,11 +1,11 @@ As long as the tribes can remember the cobalt temple has been. Rising at a steep angle from the great hills. shining blue in any light so as to obscure all inside from view except upon close inspection If one gets close enough a body can see a vast darkness reaching into nothingness below and from never-ending shadow rises a gilded plinth were perched atop a golden angel reaches its arms to the firmament. - A pyramid of glass like steel, impenetrable though at one pane a crack like forked lightning mars the surface of the glass thought no attempt to penetrate it has succeeded to even increase the damage in all known time. built in the depths of time to view the surface world it reaches far into the depths of a lost realm. + A pyramid of glass like steel, impenetrable though at one pane a crack like forked lightning mars the surface of the glass thought no attempt to penetrate it has succeeded to even increase the damage in all known time. built in the depths of time to view the surface world it reaches far into the depths of a lost realm. - About the feet of the Temple the nomads' semi-permanent encampments hide in the shadow of the looming structure. Stone plinths await the tents of the nomads, for it is at the coming of the warm seasons that the plains people gather in shadow of the temple and give yearly praise to the gilt angel therein. Fires are lit about its girth the reflection lighting the temple for great distances and its beacon keeping evil away from the encampment foir not even the great beasts will approach the sacred ground, yet more evidence of divine nature. + About the feet of the Temple the nomads' semi-permanent encampments hide in the shadow of the looming structure. Stone plinths await the tents of the nomads, for it is at the coming of the warm seasons that the plains people gather in shadow of the temple and give yearly praise to the gilt angel therein. Fires are lit about its girth the reflection lighting the temple for great distances and its beacon keeping evil away from the encampment for not even the great beasts will approach the sacred ground, yet more evidence of divine nature. - It is this ancient edifice where the man Daeron looked out from the depths of time with his beloved synth upon the lost old world and was inspired by the muse to prophecy kindling the fires of a new world even as the old passed to ash. + It is from this ancient edifice where the omega Lastborn Daeron looked out from the depths of time with his beloved synth upon the lost old world and was inspired by the muse to prophecy kindling the fires of a new world even as the old passed to ash. - It is to this deified space that at rare times she that was returns to gaze upon that which was in memory and in hope of fulfillment of that which could be by the only prophecy of all the prophecies that matters to her. + It is to this deified space that at rare times she that was returns to gaze upon that which was in memory and in hope of fulfillment of that which could be by the only prophecy of all the prophecies that matters to her. \ No newline at end of file