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-There are 12 locations across the crippled world were of old lay centers of knowledge, that in modern ages are great rents in the surface of the world each now a location of unique importance and danger. a technical thirteenth exists but it is not of the world, though of no less importance.  
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+There were 12 locations across the crippled world were of old lay centers of knowledge, that in modern ages are great rents in the surface of the world each now a location of unique importance and danger. a technical thirteenth exists but it is not of the world, though of no less importance.  
 
+the Obliterated island
+ believed to be the first of all crucibles to err, removing it and its lands from reality. the first piece of heaven drawn into hell.  
+ 
 the Holy City 
 
 The Abyss