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-In its original inception the church was initially a group of created that was little more than body of likeminded droids who after the creation of new-man in the image of old man set about guiding the instruction of the Firstborn  
+In its original inception the church was initially a group of created that was little more than body of likeminded Unborn who after the creation of new-man in the image of old-man set about guiding the instruction of the Firstborn  
 
 At what is known as the second awakening post cataclysm The Church becomes closer to what it is today, a body of likeminded individuals but with a purpose to bring the Firstborn under the influence of their new doctrines. doctrines created after the Sermon of Ethos.   
  
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   Priestly squads of hunters are sent from the varied holy bastions to find these magicians, and in that guise look for the Reincarnation of Daeron
   
- By the time of the true Firstborn few actual institutions of magic are still operating openly , most having been obliterated from history and/or gone into hiding. 
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+ By the time of the true Firstborn only one institution of magic is in operation and even that has been infiltrated. all others have been obliterated from knowledge turned into churches of the One True Magick, or gone into hiding in the lost places of the world.
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